Friday, February 01, 2013

Friday Flash Fiction: "This Scene Lacks Tension"

Yes, this is a continuation of last month's "CSI: Computer Science Investigation," and the title is one of the critiques this draft received from my weekly writer's group. I'm working on it!

Read "This Scene Lacks Tension" at 512 Words or Fewer

Curtis

1 comment:

Brian Enigma said...

This scene also lacks tentacles (which is what my brain parsed "tension" as, originally).