I'm working on a story based on a Write-a-Thon sponsor suggestion, but I don't quite have a handle on it yet. Meanwhile, here's another excerpt from "Somebody's Daughter," the story which is going to lose the Writers of the Future contest any day now. This scene may seem like a huge spoiler, but I've actually removed some crucial lines of dialogue. See if you can guess where they used to go.
Read "Act Two Problems" at 512 Words or Fewer
(Previous excerpts: "Who's Your Daddy?", "The Ties That Bind," "Everybody Loves Lawyers.")